Week 8 Comments and Feedback

Feedback in: I love receiving comments and feedback from my classmates. It helps me see things from a new perspective, and the comments are always really kind. For me, the comments that are most useful are comments that say both the good things about my writing as well as the things that need to be changed. This encourages me and pushes me to do better next time.
Feedback out: I have found myself giving the same feedback to others that I feel I like the most. I pick out the things from their writing that I really enjoyed, and then I pick out things that I was confused about or wish they would have expanded on. Sometimes it's hard to give feedback because people do so well, but I know it is helpful so I always try to find at least one thing to offer adjusting feedback about.
Blog Comments: I really like reading the introductions of people and commenting there. I think this is the most effective way to get to know someone in an online course.
As the semester continues, I want to get better at providing more constructive feedback. Sometimes it's hard for me to give feedback because I don't want someone to get upset, but I think this class is effective at teaching us how to give as well as receive feedback. I might make changes to my comment wall at some point, but I like my introduction and I think I will keep it the same.

Feedback cat! This image is applicable because it shows the importance of how feedback will help in the future. It's easy to see how feedback helps the present, but it also helps us improve as people and better ourselves for the future.

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Introduction to Pip

Hi friends! Welcome to my blog :) My name is Piper, but most of my friends call me a slew of nicknames like Pipe, Pipey, Pipes, Pipeydoodle, Pip (hence Pip Pip Hurray)... you get the point! I am a student at the University of Oklahoma, and I am currently finishing up my last semester before I graduate (don't remind me, I'm getting emotional about it). I am from Tulsa, OK originally, and I would love to go back someday, but my future is pretty up in the air right now so I am not sure when that might be. I am studying Health and Exercise Science with an emphasis on Pre-Occupational Therapy, and the goal would be to start OT school in Summer 2020. I'm super passionate about people and forming relationships, which is what drew me to OT. I love the idea of working in a profession that allows me to make new friends, love others, and solve problems all at the same time. As well as my many nicknames, my friends call me an old lady at heart. I love to read (most recent book- Where...

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A Harvest (this will make more sense as you learn about Ruth and Boaz!) Here is the link to my Storybook about the Love Story of Ruth and Boaz :)

Week 9 Story: Justice is Served

Justice is Served The husband and wife were so in love. They were ever thankful to the doctor for introducing them to each other. If it weren't for him, they would have never found each other. But that's beside the point. What they were really interested in was the money. They loved each other but they were both greedy. They thought they could never be ultimately happy unless they were rich. They both had worked for the doctor at one point or another, and so they knew that he had more money than he knew what to do with! The husband and wife were talking one night about their lack of income and how neither of them held jobs. They decided that their best bet would be to deceive the doctor and take his money! The next day, the husband went to the doctor and asked if he could borrow some money to help his wife, who was sick. The doctor willingly gave the husband money, because he trusted him and wanted the wife to get better. A week later, the husband returned, claiming his wif...

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